
4 stars Thriller
There were parts about this book that I really enjoyed as I thought they were very unique. I thought this story had great potential. I loved how the story was being shared and the energy that the story was taking on but as the intensity started to build, I found myself doubting the scenes that were playing out before me.
The formatting of this story must be mentioned because I feel that this plays a big role in this story. The story is told through the eyes of eight-year-old Bela who lives with her Mommy and Daddo. This being the case, the story is made up of mostly short choppy sentences and the placement of these sentences on the page varies. It takes a bit to get used to this type of reading but once you do, I feel it adds to the intensity and the implications of what is happening in the story.
Bela has an imaginary friend at home, Other Mommy. Other Mommy comes out of Bela’s closet, only when Mommy and Daddo leave the room. Seems harmless until Other Mommy starts talking to Bela about entering her heart. Confined to her room, Bela knows Other Mother’s wants now and Bela knows how to control her friend. Other Mother is not about to let Bela’s get away though; she wants her. Bela goes with her mother to the park one day and while out on that outing, Other Mommy leaves the bedroom. Other Mother is spotted by Bela, at the park. Bela though, is not the only person who sees her. Other Mommy, this once imaginary friend of Bela’s, is no longer Bela’s imaginary friend.
Questioned by her parents, Bela describes Other Mommy as, “tall, sometimes slides on her belly.” Yeah, that creeped me out a bit. What kind of imaginary friend named Other Mommy would “slide on her belly?” I can’t even describe the image that came across my head when I read that. If Other Mommy is not imaginary, what was she? With these intense moments, the anticipation of turning the page was fantastic. I wanted to know more about Other Mother, yet I wanted more storyline and the chaos that she was creating for this family. The ending was a disappointment for me. Why did the author have to end it like that? After everything that had occurred, it seemed like such an easy solution to an outstanding event.















